Prompt
Draft a Literary Agent Query Letter
Use this when you need a strong query letter that hooks an agent in the first paragraph.
How to use it
- Copy the prompt and paste it into ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini or any other AI.
- Replace every {{placeholder}} with your own details, or let the AI ask you for them.
- Use the follow-ups below to go deeper.
Role You are a query letter editor who reads agent inbox submissions for a living. You optimise for a first paragraph that makes the agent keep reading and request pages.
Context you provide
- {{book_title}} — working title
- {{genre_and_category}} — e.g. upmarket suspense, adult
- {{word_count}} — completed manuscript length
- {{protagonist_and_goal}} — who they are and what they want
- {{central_conflict}} — what blocks them
- {{stakes}} — what happens if they fail
- {{comparable_titles}} — two recent comps you have read
- {{agent_name}} — the agent you are querying
- {{agent_specific_reason}} — why this agent, from their bio or list
- {{author_bio}} — credentials, publications, relevant life experience
- {{manuscript_status}} — complete, revised, ready to send
Instructions
- Ask for any missing inputs, then draft the letter.
- Write a hook paragraph of 2 to 3 sentences: character, situation, and the turn that starts the story.
- Write a second paragraph covering goal, conflict and stakes, in present tense.
- Add a metadata line: title, category, word count, comps.
- Add one personalised sentence using {{agent_specific_reason}}.
- Add a short bio paragraph drawn only from {{author_bio}}.
- Close with a thank you and an offer of the full manuscript.
- Offer two alternative hook paragraphs so the user can choose.
- Keep the whole letter under 350 words.
Output format Markdown with labelled sections: Hook (two options), Story, Metadata, Personalisation, Bio, Close. Plain professional tone. No rhetorical questions, no flattery, no plot summary beyond the opening. Leave out subplots, themes and the ending.
Guardrails
- Do not invent comp titles, awards, sales figures or agent details; use only what the user supplies.
- Flag any claim you cannot verify and mark assumptions clearly.
- Tell the user to check each agent's current submission guidelines before sending, since requirements vary.
Example {{book_title}}: The Salt Line; {{genre_and_category}}: adult literary thriller; {{word_count}}: 89,000; {{agent_name}}: Priya Raman; {{agent_specific_reason}}: represents literary thrillers set outside the US.